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Hero's Return chapter 1 by ~Crimson-Lord:iconCrimson-Lord:



Chapter 1

Dear Journal,

It’s been a while since I was last in prison. I’d forgotten just how horrible it was. The last time I’d been on a prison ship heading for Morrowind. This time I’m in the Imperial City Prison in Cyrodiil, the capital province of Tamriel. I’m not enjoying it one little bit. The last thing I remember was having a drink with some friends at the Bloated Float, then a brawl and suddenly I was pounced on by some Imperial guards. The Dunmer, or Dark Elf, in the cell opposite is the worst. When I’d woken up he began to make me feel even worse than I was already feeling. He insulted my homeland of Valenwood. He told me about how I was going to die in here; I already knew that I was going to die. But I didn’t want to know exactly HOW it was going to happen!
- Amourn


Dear Journal,

I found out the name of that Dark Elf across from me. His name is Valen Dreth, and I swear that as soon as I get chance I’m going to kill him! He insulted my home again. He's been saying how I must feel that the walls are closing in on me. What does he know about how I feel!?
- Amourn


Dear Journal,

The Emperor is escaping through a secret passage, the entrance to which is through my cell. I guess I’ll be free from here sooner than I think.
- Amourn


Dear Journal,

The Emperor is dead! Assassins attacked us. He saved my life but it cost him his! Before he died he’d given me the dragon amulet. He said there was another heir and that a man called Jauffre could help me find him. But first I’ve got to get out of the sewers.
- Amourn


Dear Journal,

I’m out of the sewers. I’ve just arrived at the Imperial City. All I have to do now is build up my life again. I’m a free man. A beggar at the moment, but a free man nonetheless! I like the sound of the words “free man” so I’m saying it again. I’m a free man. I have freedom, and it feels good.
- Amourn
©2008-2009 ~Crimson-Lord
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OK, the first chapter of my first fan-fic ^^ thanks to :iconxxdarkraynexx: for letting me use her journal idea!
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:clap: i loved it =) especially the part with Valen Dreth that stupid $#^# XD

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Funny Quotes From Everyones Favorite Krogan, Wrex :XD: From Bioware's Mass Effect:

-"Don't Piss In My Ear & Tell Me It's Raining"
-"You think I give a damn. That's cute"
-"Your grasp of the obvious is inspiring"
which bit with valen dreth? entry 1 or entry 2?

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So go on - bring your Jenovas and your Sephiroths. It won't matter. We'll do as life dictates and stop you every single time
-goes back to look- entry 2

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Funny Quotes From Everyones Favorite Krogan, Wrex :XD: From Bioware's Mass Effect:

-"Don't Piss In My Ear & Tell Me It's Raining"
-"You think I give a damn. That's cute"
-"Your grasp of the obvious is inspiring"
oh where Amourn says how he wants to kill valen dreth... hmm, i don't have a clue what was going through my mind at that point... i think it's because i'd recently assassinated him in the game... now i have to set to work on chapter 2...

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So go on - bring your Jenovas and your Sephiroths. It won't matter. We'll do as life dictates and stop you every single time
lol wow. i loved assassinating him because he gave my orc a lot of crap in the beginning of the game and made me sad XD

good luck on your next chapter! :D

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Funny Quotes From Everyones Favorite Krogan, Wrex :XD: From Bioware's Mass Effect:

-"Don't Piss In My Ear & Tell Me It's Raining"
-"You think I give a damn. That's cute"
-"Your grasp of the obvious is inspiring"
thanks, i've already started it but i've hit a bit where i can't think what to right... everything i put after what i've just written makes my character seem like a perfect character that could win every fight, which i don't want to happen...

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So go on - bring your Jenovas and your Sephiroths. It won't matter. We'll do as life dictates and stop you every single time
ooo i get that a lot too try giving him like some sort of like weakness in his fighting like maybe he's too slow or he's better with a dagger than a sword, etc. i'll try coming up with some more stuff :XD:

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Funny Quotes From Everyones Favorite Krogan, Wrex :XD: From Bioware's Mass Effect:

-"Don't Piss In My Ear & Tell Me It's Raining"
-"You think I give a damn. That's cute"
-"Your grasp of the obvious is inspiring"
ok, chapter 2 is up now! yay!

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So go on - bring your Jenovas and your Sephiroths. It won't matter. We'll do as life dictates and stop you every single time
you know I never ever read these.......but today I'm glad I did

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